The Mystery :: Creative Writing Examples

The MysteryRing . . . Ring screamed the phone. Damn who could that be . . . its to a greater extent or less s level off a.m. on a Saturday . . . . hold on Allison it will barely take aminute . . . Hello? detective Pat said. Hey sullen Sergeant McGurn but we need you to come low to the stationas soon as possible . . . theres more trouble oer at Gibbons. Meet me there.Hey sugar I have to go down to Gibbons theres more trouble, do youneed a ride someplace? said the exasperate homicide detective.Its always something with you Pat . . . every time I come over youeither get called in or youre so drunk that you cant even remember who I am . .. Its over Pat and then she left. draw on car . . . Please work . . . Just this once . . . in that respect you go.No matter what anyone says your the best three tone Buick Ive ever had. jar againsthe was a real cheap skate, spent all his gold on St. Ides and Old English64oz.ers. He was always borrowing bullion too. He still owes me seven hundred cardinal eight dollars and ninety five cents, plus tax. For a Harvard graduate hesure is a wash up. The only thing he could afford to drive was the car thepolice station gave him. It was a 1986 Buick with a green trunk, maroon body,and a navy blue hood. The thing took about three minutes to sound and anotherfive to warm up, and that was in the summer.Ten minutes later(prenominal) he showed up at my desk. I could still smell her odor on him. He looked terrible, like usual, man he was such a good guy, buthe didnt have a lucky work up in his body.So whats up now Steve? . . . another vending motorcar robbery . . .more scuff marks? Pat looked like a detective, you know what I mean, the waythe detectives looked in those old movies. He had a bad suit on, with a tieloosened and hanging down and his shirt opened up, and he usually was sleepingat his desk with the joyous dimmed and his feet up. The hat he had on lookedlike it had really been faint by a detective out of an old movie, it was all grimy and had a fold like somebody sat on it.No not this time Pat . . . Its a little worse .